Well, not exactly. I mean, it is free, but its not a sample. and its actually not our band, but rather my wife...

but lets start from the beginning...

a few months ago, during rehearsals with my band, my wife asked me if i could help her write some music. she is a talented singer and pianist, but rather unexperienced...

so i agreed...

sometime down the road i wrote her a song, lyrics and melodies. together, we recorded everything and today, we present it to everyone via myspace...

so here it is...

AIDENN QUEEN MYSPACE PAGE!

You can listen to two songs: A Story Untold, original version, and a remix i did, basically more guitar driven, called The Raven...

so listen to the songs and tell me if you like it and wich version you prefer^^

aidenn queen? that's a beautiful name. aidenn means "eden", doesn't it? i've read it somewhere recently in a fantasy story.

your music sounds ok to me, i like the style, but it's a bit monotoneous. not bad, but also not that conspicuous.

joey.

I can see where you're coming from... it's no complicated composition with a typical structure.
I guess maybe you'll like the second song (not yet recorded) better then, it will be longer and structured quite differently. Thanks for your feedback so far ^^

Oh, and I was inspired by Edgar Allan Poe's "The Raven"... there's a part that goes like

Tell this soul with sorrow laden if, within the distant Aidenn
It shall clasp a sainted maiden whom the angels named Lenore
Clasp a rare and radiant maiden whom the angels named Lenore
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."

nice voice, its sounds cool to have a husband wife combo.

the instruments and music itself sounds waaaayyy too synthetic, too "midi", too clean. You might want to download better drum samples.

well i gotta say , i really really wanted to come say it was a pile of garbage after hearing it was ur wife , but , after hearing it it's pretty good. Still , wwhat are u doing letting ur wife compose music , shouldnt she be scrubbing the floor or doing some dishes ?

"comeon, we live in 2007... nowadays, women do what they want.. and its good that way-.- "
Yes , this are some very gay times we're living in , but this can't last forever.

lol i love how you snuck in "gay" as a derogatory term. not a rarity of course but adds an interesting touch to this already-derogatory post!

not that i agree with him.

on-topic: decent music. better than a lot of stuff i've heard on the radio but lacks the professional touch thanks to what seems to be MIDI, and the vocal effects feel over-done to my ears. very nice voice, though, and overall i like the song. both versions.

i'm not enough of a fan of your flavour of music to justify picking one over the other, as one doesn't really stand out above the other.

julz

Well I dont see howh gay cannot be derogatory , soon people will make it a compliment , lol.
For my full answer to the music , i like it , but like Julz said , there is something missing , I didnt really like the singing , the voice is nice , but over all it feels like an atmosphere track rather than a song , in my opinion , u should get rid of the voice , or fade it like a background , and have ur wife sing something , like , a story or something , but she should sing in a normal voice , maybe a sad story or something , have some feeling in the song. But over all it's good , give diff styles a shot , it's hard to nail it on the first try.

Edit: Btw , I know nothing about music , so dont take me too seriously , LOL.