the glass (refraction shader?) seems to "lag behind". If you rotate the camera it looks like the glass (or more the room behind it) is moving/shaking a little...
other than that, great work! The portals look too much like a door though, and too little like portals. Maybe a shader on them? Some distortion? some effect on the edge of the portal?


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